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Bài tập lớp Writing Journey 1/2026

Thầy SangJanuary 16, 20261 min read82 views0 likes

Lớp Writing Journey

Làm 1 lợi/ bất lợi cho chủ đề sau: The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Lâm Gia Huy1/16/2026

On the one hand, there are many compelling reasons why using social media offers instant convenience. Today, people are occupied with their jobs, making it difficult for them to stay in touch with each other. Therefore, they would prefer something faster and more convenient, making social media a great tool for them to use.

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Nguyễn Thị Xuân Hương1/16/2026

Using social platforms can help keep in touch with relatives and friends. For example, we can use Zalo or Messenger to chat and make video calls together. They allow people to interact regularly with others all over the world. In addition, social media helps users share their daily life, thoughts, and emotions through photos and posts, which makes relationships closer. It is also useful for joining online communities where people can find others with the same interests.

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#	Feedback
1.	help keep in touch → help us keep in touch Giải thích: Cần có chủ ngữ 'us' sau 'help' để câu rõ nghĩa hơn.
2.	makes relationships closer → strengthens relationships Giải thích: Cách diễn đạt 'makes relationships closer' không tự nhiên, nên dùng 'strengthens relationships' để chính xác hơn.

Yến Nguyễn1/16/2026

Using social media can enhance friend relationships and be more convenient than face-to-face communication. For example, users of social media can contact their friends every moment through comments, messages, and video calls. They don’t need to go out and meet friends. As a result, it saves time and also money.

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